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For Writers => Prompts => Topic started by: Agent24 on February 22, 2018, 10:40:19 AM

Title: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Agent24 on February 22, 2018, 10:40:19 AM
Or just enjoy it...  ;D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eK41XdAOw3o
(Nitai Hershkovits - Flyin' Bamboo Feat. MNDSGN)
Title: Re: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Antelope on February 26, 2018, 08:18:02 PM
This is fun! Have you written anything inspired by it Agent24?
Title: Re: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Agent24 on March 05, 2018, 07:16:41 PM
I have, now that you've made me do it :P


Triptych to Terra

bamboo growing tall
pointy tips marking new life
seed pods flood the sky

piano’s soft voice
colourful banners flying
insect conquerors

dancing on the clouds
a thousand tiny foot-falls
high in the bright sky
Title: Re: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Antelope on March 05, 2018, 08:10:02 PM
 :)
Title: Re: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Candicat on March 22, 2018, 08:49:22 AM
 :-* What a cute video, it really mellowed me out.
Title: Nature Walked: short story
Post by: Candicat on March 22, 2018, 09:47:21 AM
Short story.
Title: Re: Inspire yourself somehow with this music video?
Post by: Antelope on March 22, 2018, 10:12:40 AM
Hi Candicat, welcome!

Thanks for sharing your short story. I found it hard hitting because it deals with such an important issue - consent. I really enjoyed the meanderings of the character's mind in the first part of the story. The bleeding gums and eel-like kiss made me go eww, and think we were heading for a horror story. I was so relieved at the end!

In the third paragraph, I wanted to know more of the details about them. What was the band on his t-shirt? What creek was it? How many eels had they seen? Maybe we could hear a bit of dialogue there? The part about the magnesium made me laugh.

Thanks again for sharing. Great to have you on the forum :-)