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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Japanese Juxtaposition
« on: July 04, 2018, 04:58:57 PM »
Wonderful poems! Thank you for sharing Aaron  :D

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« on: May 17, 2018, 11:30:32 AM »

So nice to read your reflections. I agree Agent24, it is quite overwhelming! I found it easier to follow the second time.

Thank you for posting the videos, so we can watch them again. I'm little bit obsessed with the 'conservative wife' one, and I want to write a response poem to it. I shall post it once I've written it.

Some many interesting and intriguing elements. Some of the images that have been bouncing around in my mind are:
the crow nibbling the taxidermy bear's nostril
the claw in the the garbage one
the astonishing (and yes anxiety inducing) architecture in the scientist one

What sort of film would you make Agent24?

And thank you for sharing your poem TSA1984. I especially like the last two lines. They are like a chorus somehow. I'm so glad to hear you are entering that competition!

And and thank you for your poem Serena! It gives me the sense of physical writer's blocks (like bricks or something) being stacked on top of each other.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« on: May 09, 2018, 02:59:00 PM »
I thought this might be of interest to you guys. A one line poetry contest:

How are you doing out there?

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« on: May 03, 2018, 05:43:27 PM »
Yay for spirals!

I did a scribble today. I scribbled to music which sounded like a piano with a car crash inside it. It was quite fun trying to capture sound on the page.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« on: May 02, 2018, 10:09:54 AM »
I can imagine a wonderful 'self in puddle' photo series coming on.

I did a mini scribble yesterday

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« on: May 01, 2018, 12:53:40 PM »
I plan to do a scribble each day (possibly some words among my scribbles), and to submit poems to two places for publication.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Italian Ingenuity
« on: April 24, 2018, 08:42:19 AM »
Great poem!! Thanks for sharing. I especially like the first stanza and the idea of the frame rate dropping when you're tired. I also like the link between "Go the dragons" and the smoke coming in and out of your nose.

Here is a competition for you all to enter:

Please do!

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Italian Ingenuity
« on: April 22, 2018, 04:43:17 PM »
Hi folks!

Thanks for sharing your poem TSA1984! Please don't feel shy about posting as much as you want to. It will inspire the rest of us.

And thanks for the article Agent 24. I will have a read.

I sent my manuscript away!!!  ;D ;D ;D Happy.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Italian Ingenuity
« on: April 15, 2018, 06:44:25 PM »
Sorry I haven't posted anything. My one goal for the next two weeks is to finish the writer's CV and send away my manuscript before my 30th birthday next week.
I love the idea of an outdoor writing picnic. I have a full schedule of uni and step-children-ing for the next two weeks so I won't be able to come along, but I'd love to hear about it!
Happy writing or incubating, all  :)

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Easter Eagerness
« on: April 05, 2018, 10:00:54 AM »
Well, I have two big essays due tomorrow and I have suddenly developed a keen interest in learning how to make elaborate Indian curries. There are worse ways to procrastinate I suppose - my kitchen does smell really good.

I am still plodding along though, writing quite a few words every day. Looking forward to next week when I can start writing poetry again!

Opportunities / Re: Submission opportunity for under 25's
« on: April 05, 2018, 09:06:48 AM »
Yay, awesome Serena! Submit submit!

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Easter Eagerness
« on: April 03, 2018, 04:09:39 PM »
Yes, please post your poems here! I would like some inspiration.

I am back in computer-land and wrote around 300 words today on an essay.

I did not do any writing over Easter, not even in the sand. I also did not got near my computer or phone (very happy about this) but I did draw some pictures, slept on the beach for 3 nights, saw the sunrise and the moonrise over the water at the East Cape, and cuddled some horses which all make me happy.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Easter Eagerness
« on: March 29, 2018, 11:00:05 AM »
Hi guys!
I have done no writing today, and I am about to go offline for Easter. I plan on doing some writing in the sand with my toe.
Have fun chatting with the Easter bunny etc.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Easter Eagerness
« on: March 28, 2018, 10:58:55 PM »
That clip is funny :-)

I was just about to say that I wrote nothing today, but then I opened up my essay and wrote just under 200 words on it. The only reason I am still awake is that I ate too much chocolate this evening.

Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Some found poetry I saw on Facebook
« on: March 28, 2018, 09:45:47 AM »
I wish they had also blanked out the name at the top...

This is lovely! I hadn't thought of erasing individual letters to spell out words.

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