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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Japanese Juxtaposition
« Last post by Antelope on July 04, 2018, 04:58:57 PM »
Wonderful poems! Thank you for sharing Aaron  :D
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: Japanese Juxtaposition
« Last post by Agent24 on June 24, 2018, 03:59:22 PM »
I managed to scrape this one out today.


finis


all has gone
or will go

defeat falls
across me

the tunnel
ends in darkness

i am hope’s
empty promise

i am so tired
of trying

      * * *

in my mind
there is nothing

no words
or sentences

no reason
or purpose

simply a void
a black hole

an implosion
of the self

    * * *

i am broken
like faded sunlight

worn out
like stagnant air

a shell-shocked
rabbit

staring down
the inevitable

silently screaming
for oblivion
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Feedback and Encouragement / Japanese Juxtaposition
« Last post by Agent24 on June 19, 2018, 10:00:13 PM »
For some reason I thought a new topic was probably in order by now? The name reflects the situational context of my mind. Whatever that means. Perhaps my Wasabi-themed hairdo has detrimentally impacted all cognitive function.


To write a poem
Is my desire
But I shall find
My hair on fire

And if the flames
Cannot be quenched
I'll find myself
To be entrenched

I must concur
With all that follows
Even as I squeeze
The bellows

For if my hair
Does not burn bright
I'll freeze to death
This chilly night

I took this rhyme
From mister Wonka
While doing burnouts
In my Tonka

It makes no sense
I can attest
This effort's really
Not my best

So I say nowt
Now but goodnight
And hope my hair
Will stay alight.
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Agent24 on June 16, 2018, 09:57:15 PM »
I went to Japan
I thought it was grand
Now I've emotionally crashed
And this poem is just sad
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Serena on June 09, 2018, 02:33:53 PM »
Only wrote one line today: and flipped like washing flapping over its pegs.

I'm looking forward to seeing you guys again  :) it's been ages
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Serena on June 07, 2018, 05:47:11 PM »
Did some words today. Also invented a new term for what I keep doing out of laziness to make it feel more productive  ;D

          journapoetry – writing the day’s musings in short, mysterious, cut up lines of cliché and the everyday.
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Agent24 on June 07, 2018, 10:44:03 AM »
I like the poems! Both similar style, interesting. It's nice to get in other people's heads and remember our similarities.

I have been so busy I have barely written anything but I have a lot of photos and video and my feet feel like they're going to fall off.

I went to an art museum the day before yesterday, wish they had allowed photos. Benesse House I think it's called. I'm trying to write something about it.
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Serena on June 06, 2018, 06:40:30 PM »
Did some staring. Have also altered my staring sessions to 20 mins as it feels less tedious and hopefully someday I'll continue beyond the session if I do it more frequently.
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Serena on June 03, 2018, 01:18:36 PM »
Ooh holidays are exciting! I look forward to hearing about it  :D

I stared at my screen/floor for 30 mins. Wrote a random, stream of consciousness type thing. It is attached for your amusement (/will make you feel better about your writing).
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Feedback and Encouragement / Re: American Anger
« Last post by Agent24 on June 02, 2018, 01:03:09 AM »
I haven't done much because I'm on holiday!

I hope to post something interesting soon if I can. Lack of sleep has prevented much thinkage though, and internet access is inconsistent.
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