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Serena

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seastrangles
« on: December 12, 2017, 06:18:38 PM »
seaweed
seastrangles
hope

washes away
life
death
old water bottles
jandals
fish eggs

currents hide prejudice
preference
promises

sea caterpillars crawl
confusing the unsuspecting
puddle watcher
rock slipper
horizon wonderer
hopeless hoper
listless ocean





POSITIVE FEEDBACK ONLY PLEASE
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Re: sea strangles
« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2017, 09:31:06 AM »
I like the pattern made by seaweed and seastrangles, especially with the latter as one word.

"Horizon Wonderer" sounds nautically romantic in some way, a good name for a ship?

I don't know if it counts as feedback, but the poem reminded me of the song Davy Jones' Locker by David Gray.
"Our imagination spans that infinite moment, between the asterisk and the ampersand."

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Re: sea strangles
« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2017, 03:08:28 PM »
Oh interesting, I'll check it out.

And thanks! All inspired by your artwork  ;D